I'm not really sure what I should say about this. The idea was really good and one I thought I would love. Some parts worked well and others didn't. I'm giving this 3.5
but that isn't a very sure rating for me. I'm rounding it up and down in my head all the time.Things I liked.
- The gay for you. It was believable, I guess.
- The chemistry between the two MC's.
- The fact it's part of a series,
but I won't be continuing it
Had it worked more, that would have had me very excited.
- It has a HEA.Things I hated!
- Dagger's hands spread over Ryan's chest, covering both his breasts.
I don't think I need to say any more.
- The break up. I felt it was something to add in order to make the book longer.
It might seem strange that I only have two things on the second list. But they really bugged me. The break up maybe more so, but I think overall the book felt a bit like.... I don't know. Maybe this would have worked better as an m/f book? It certainly felt like that a couple of times. However, I did think the couple were good together during some of the rare scenes they weren't arguing or unsure. It was a bit difficult for me, I have to say, to see how things turned out. It goes from one issues. Ryan coming out. To the thing that lead to their break up.
Overall, this wasn't exactly a bad book. Maybe it would work for others, but for me it just wasn't working as well as it could have.