The story was nice and I chuckled a couple of times while I was reading it, but I wanted something a bit longer. I really wanted more Tony and Jack as an actual couple. Even if it had been an extra chapter closer to the end where Tony introduced Jack to his family or something. The ending just didn't go the way I thought it would have. But everything else was good and it makes me want to read more of this couple. So that's a good thing, right?